This peer review session was very good.  I got a lot of information, especially on my introduction. My introduction had too much information that was really should be part of supporting claims later in the paper. I felt it really went good in class. But I still wanted to talk to Cynthia. I met with Cynthia and she also thought the introduction got into the support for claims that should come later. Also, my choice of words needed some changes. Plus I didn’t make clear why a statement was a problem. I got into a car accident after school today and need to cut this short.